《雅思口语真经总纲1.0》笔记------第四章：口语素材大全（part1、part2、part3回答准则及练习方法，不包括范例答案）★★★★★
文章目录
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- [What kinds of physical exercise do you like?](#What kinds of physical exercise do you like?)
- [Do you think children should do sports regularly?](#Do you think children should do sports regularly?)
- [What was your favourite sport when you were young?](#What was your favourite sport when you were young?)
- [What kinds of sports are popular in China?](#What kinds of sports are popular in China?)
What kinds of physical exercise do you like?
20240811
答
Well, I'm into tons of physical exercise, like swimming, hiking, riding and so on. But because of tense work, It's hard for me to distribute time to do these exercise, maybe twice a week, or even longer.
评价
你的答案已经很好地表达了你的想法，不过我们可以针对一些细节进行优化，让答案更自然、流畅。
首先，我们来逐句分析并改进你的回答：
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"Well, I'm into tons of physical exercise, like swimming, hiking, riding and so on."
- 这句话的开头用了"Well"，这很好，因为它给人一种轻松的口语感。不过，"tons of"在这里稍显非正式，可以替换为更常见的表达。同时，"riding"可能需要具体化，是指骑自行车还是骑马？
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"But because of tense work, It's hard for me to distribute time to do these exercise, maybe twice a week, or even longer."
- "tense work"应该是"busy work"或"a hectic work schedule（繁忙的工作日程）"，这样听起来更自然。在英语中，"distribute time"不是一个常用的表达，我们通常说"find time"或者"make time"。此外，"these exercise"中的"exercise"应该是复数形式"exercises"，因为你提到了多种运动。
现在，我将根据上述点评重新构建你的答案：
"Oh, I really enjoy a variety of physical exercises. You know, activities like swimming, hiking, and cycling really catch my fancy. However, with my hectic work schedule, it's quite challenging to find time for these activities. I manage to squeeze them in maybe twice a week, or sometimes even less frequently."
"哦，我真的很喜欢各种各样的体育锻炼。你知道的，像游泳、徒步旅行和骑自行车这样的活动真的很吸引我。然而，由于我繁忙的工作日程，找时间进行这些活动真的很有挑战性。我设法一周挤出时间做这些运动，或许两次，有时甚至更少。"
这样的回答更加地道和连贯，同时也保持了口语化的风格，听起来就像是与朋友聊天。通过具体说明"cycling"而不是笼统的"riding"，使得答案更加清晰。此外，使用"catch my fancy"增加了一点个性和色彩，使得整个答案更加生动有趣。
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A: I really enjoy working out, so in fact I dig many sports, including playing badminton, riding the exercise bike, hiting the gym to lift weights, swimming and so on. As a matter of fact, before coming here, I rode the exercise bike at home for about thirty minutes and it helped me work up a sweat. That made me feel really good.
我真的很喜欢做运动，实际上我对很多运动都很感兴趣，包括打羽毛球、骑健身车、去健身房举重、游泳等等。事实上，在来这里之前，我在家骑了大约三十分钟的健身车，这让我出了一身汗。那让我感觉非常好。
疑问
Do you think children should do sports regularly?
20240812
答
Yep, I think children are at their best time to grow, if they do some sports regularly, it'd contribute to their heathy. But don't forget to keep safety while doing excercise.
评价
首先，我们来逐句分析你的原始回答，并指出可能的错误和改进点：
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Yep, I think children are at their best time to grow:
- 这里"are at their best time to grow"表达上有些笨拙和不自然。更地道的表达可能是"are at an ideal stage for growth"或者简单地说"are growing quickly"。
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if they do some sports regularly, it'd contribute to their heathy:
- 这里"heathy"应该是一个拼写错误，正确的单词是"health"。
- 句子结构上可以稍作简化，以增强语言的自然流畅性。
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But don't forget to keep safety while doing excercise:
- "excercise"拼写错误，正确的拼写是"exercise"。
- "keep safety"是一个不常见的表达，更自然的表达是"stay safe"。
根据上述分析，下面是一个优化后的答案，试图保持原始意图，同时使表达更加自然和符合英语口语习惯：
"Absolutely, I definitely think kids should engage in sports regularly. You know, they're in a crucial phase of growth and doing sports can really boost their health. Plus, it's not just about being active---sports help them develop teamwork and discipline. Just remember, it's important to make sure they stay safe while they're at it, especially with all the running and jumping involved."
"当然，我坚信孩子们应该定期参与体育运动。你知道的，他们正处于成长的关键阶段，做运动真的可以提升他们的健康。而且，这不仅仅是为了保持活跃------体育运动还帮助他们培养团队合作和纪律性。只是记得，确保他们在运动时保持安全非常重要，尤其是涉及到所有的跑跳动作时。"
这个答案使用了更自然的语言，加入了一些额外的信息来丰富回答内容，并使用了更地道的表达方式。同时，我也试图让语气更轻松友好，就像是在与某人闲聊一样，这样能更好地符合雅思口语的风格。
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范例答案
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A: Absolutely. There is no doubt that sport should play a vital role in children's lives. In fact, what I think is that it's not just about children; everybody should do the same. Um, regular exercise is important for children in so many ways. For starters, it allows them to lead a healthy life. Nobody should ever lead a sedentary life, so if they do sports on a regular basis, they can be healthier. Another reason is that a lot of sports are team sports, so by participating in them, children can learn how to work with others on a team, how to cooperate and stuff like that, which are very important for them when they grow up.
A：绝对如此。毫无疑问，体育在儿童生活中应该扮演一个至关重要的角色。实际上，我认为这不仅仅关于儿童；每个人都应该这样做。嗯，定期运动对儿童来说在很多方面都很重要。首先，它可以让他们过上健康的生活。没有人应该过着久坐不动的生活，所以如果他们定期进行体育运动，他们可以更加健康。另一个原因是很多体育运动都是团队运动，通过参与这些运动，儿童可以学习如何在团队中与他人合作，如何协作等等，这些对他们长大后非常重要。
疑问
What was your favourite sport when you were young?
20240813
答
When I were young, I think my favorite sport had to be swimming, there was a small river just located in front of my house, I swam with my friends in it whatever the weather was rainy or sunny. That was the best time of my life.
评价
你的回答整体上传达了一个很有趣的故事，但确实有几处可以改进以更好地符合雅思口语的标准。首先，我们来逐句分析并指出可能的问题：
- When I were young --- 这里使用了错误的动词形式，应该使用单数形式 "was"。
- I think my favorite sport had to be swimming --- 这里的 "had to be" 可能听起来有点过于强制，可以用更自然的表达方式。
- there was a small river just located in front of my house --- "just located" 这个词组用法不太自然，可以简化。
- I swam with my friends in it whatever the weather was rainy or sunny --- 这里的表达有点拗口，可以简化并改进连贯性。
- That was the best time of my life --- 这句很好，但可以稍作调整以更自然地连接前文。
现在，让我们根据这些点重新构建你的回答，使其更加自然和吸引人：
"When I was young, I'd say swimming was definitely my favorite sport. There was a small river right in front of my house, and no matter the weather---rainy or sunny---I was always there swimming with my friends. Those were some of the best times of my life."
当我还小的时候，我得说游泳绝对是我最喜欢的运动。我家门前有一条小河，无论是下雨还是晴天，我总是和朋友们在那里游泳。那些是我生命中最美好的时光。
这个回答用词更自然，语法正确，并且流畅地连接了整个故事。同时，它还展示了你的情感和对这段回忆的珍视，这能帮助你在雅思口语考试中取得更好的成绩。
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范例答案
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A: When I was growing up, I think my favourite sport was playing badminton and I would do it on a daily basis with my parents. Every day after dinner, we would just go to the park near our home and play badminton for about forty or fifty minutes. It was a good opportunity for us to bond and it also helped me live a healthier life.
A: 我小时候，我觉得我最喜欢的运动是打羽毛球，我几乎每天都和我的父母一起打。每天晚饭后，我们就会去我们家附近的公园，打大约四十到五十分钟的羽毛球。这是一个很好的加强家庭关系的机会，同时也让我过上了更健康的生活。
疑问
What kinds of sports are popular in China?
20240813
答
Without a doubt, table tennis is definitely the most popular sport because it's the nation sport in China, apart from that, running, swimming are also catch people's fancy, especially swimming, many people swim on a regular basis, if you went to the swimming gym, you may see the lanes are filled with people, making it really jam-packed, but you know, swimming is really good for people's back, especially for those who live a sedentary life.
评价
你的答案提供了很多有趣的信息，但我们可以做一些调整，让它更加自然和流畅，同时修正一些语法错误。我将逐句分析并提供优化建议：
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Without a doubt, table tennis is definitely the most popular sport because it's the nation sport in China --- 这里的"nation sport"应为"national sport"。同时，"Without a doubt" 和 "definitely" 重复强调了，可以考虑去掉一个以避免过度强调。
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apart from that, running, swimming are also catch people's fancy --- 这里的表达"catch people's fancy"不太自然，通常我们会说"are also popular"或"also appeal to people"。此外，需要在"running"和"swimming"前加上"and"来连接这两个并列的元素。
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especially swimming, many people swim on a regular basis --- 这句话可以合并为一个更连贯的句子，改善结构。
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if you went to the swimming gym, you may see the lanes are filled with people, making it really jam-packed --- "swimming gym"不是一个常用的表达，可以简化为"swimming pool"或"public pool"。时态也需要调整，使用一致的时态，"went"应改为"go"，"may see"改为"will see"。
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but you know, swimming is really good for people's back, especially for those who live a sedentary life --- 这句话可以稍作简化和重新组织，以更自然地融入整个回答。
根据这些点，我为你重新构建了答案：
"Without a doubt, table tennis is the national sport of China and incredibly popular. Besides, running and swimming also really appeal to people. Swimming is particularly popular; if you go to a public pool, you'll likely find it bustling with people. You know, swimming is fantastic for the back, especially for those who lead a sedentary lifestyle."
毫无疑问，乒乓球是中国的国球，而且极其流行。此外，跑步和游泳也非常受欢迎。特别是游泳，非常受欢迎；如果你去公共游泳池，你很可能会发现那里人头攒动。你知道，游泳对背部非常有好处，尤其适合那些久坐生活方式的人。
这个版本更加简洁、自然，语法也更准确，应该能更好地符合雅思口语的评分标准。希望这个回答对你有帮助！
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范例答案
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A: Many sports are well-liked here, like swimming and jogging. Perhaps swimming is the most popular sport, because every time you go to a public swimming pool, especially in the summer, you will see it's jam-packed with people. In one lane, there are usually dozens of people, so sometimes it makes it a little hard for people to swim.
A: 这里有很多受欢迎的运动，比如游泳和慢跑。或许游泳是最受欢迎的运动，因为每当你在夏天去公共游泳池时，你会看到那里人山人海。在一条泳道里，通常会挤满几十人，所以有时候这会让游泳变得有点困难。