❌ Well, it makes me safe because I always feel nervous.
✅ Well, it makes me feel safe because I always feel nervous.
❌I am afraid about the future.
✅I am afraid of the future.
❌I am afraid about there must be something terrible happened.
✅I am afraid there must be something terrible that happened.
❌When playing games, I forget all the things I am worried about.
✅When playing games, I will forget all the things I am worried.
❌I always play video games, like from Steam.
✅I always play video games, like those from Steam.
❌Actually, the games are very easy, because I don't like too hard games.
✅Actually, the games are very easy because I don't like very hard games.
❌I always play some games that make me feel relaxed, such as I can make some cooking, do some easy things that make me feel relaxed.
✅I always play some games that make me feel relaxed, such as cooking or doing some easy things that make me feel relaxed.
❌Actually I don't like.
✅Actually I don't like it.
❌So I don't have time to make a cook.
✅So I don't have time to cook.
❌And I sometimes I want to buy some food but you know I am living in UK.
✅And sometimes I want to buy some food but you know I am living in the UK.
❌Eating Chinese food is from my birth and rise
✅Eating Chinese food has been part of my life since I was born and raised.
❌my friend do not always have time eating with me
✅my friends do not always have time to eat with me.
❌but you know I can't every day every meal
✅but you know, I can't eat outside every day or every meal
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❌I'm a very enjoy myself person.
✅I am a person who enjoys myself very much.
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❌I enjoy staying with myself.
✅I enjoy staying by myself.
❌this time is always the happiest time in the whole day.
✅this time is always the happiest time of the whole day
外卖 takeout
❌I call them and let them to send
✅I call them and let them send it
let do sth
❌I want to have a rest
✅I want to rest
"I want to have a rest" should be "I want to rest" because "have a rest" is less natural in this context.
❌I talk to you is very happy.
✅I talking to you makes me very happy.