摘要:很多同学做实验天衣无缝,却栽在了 Methods 的写作上 ------ 语态乱用、时态混写,被审稿人批「非规范学术写作」,轻则大修重写,重则直接拒稿。其实 Methods 的写作根本不靠语感,而是有全球通用的「黄金规则」。本文结合国际期刊规范,拆解被动 / 主动语态的用法、一般过去 / 现在时的边界,附避坑清单 + 万能套用句式,看完就能直接用,再也不被语法问题拖后腿。本文已收录至【科技论文写作全攻略】专栏,点关注,不迷路!
先上核心纲领,这也是国际期刊对 Methods 部分的核心要求(原文引用):
Methods 部分的核心目标,是让同行能 1:1 复现你的实验;而规范的语态与时态,是让内容清晰、客观、严谨的基础。
一、语态黄金规则:被动为主,主动为辅,告别流水账日记
很多同学写 Methods,通篇都是「we did this, we did that」,活像小学生日记,学术感直接归零。这也是 90% 的人都会踩的第一个坑。
核心规则:实验操作优先用「一般过去时被动语态」
读者天然知道实验是你做的,完全不用反复强调「we 我们」。用被动语态,能把读者的注意力聚焦在「实验做了什么」,而不是「谁做了实验」,这也是学术写作客观性的核心要求。
正反案例对比,看完就会用
| 反面教材(流水账式主动语态) | 正面优化(规范被动语态) |
|---|---|
| We collected soil samples in Chengdu in April 2023. We centrifuged the samples at 12000 rpm for 15 min. | Soil samples were collected in Chengdu in April 2023. The samples were centrifuged at 12000 rpm for 15 min at 4℃. |
| We extracted total protein from cells using RIPA lysis buffer. We measured protein concentration with the BCA method. | Total protein was extracted from HepG2 cells using RIPA lysis buffer. Protein concentration was determined using the BCA protein quantification kit. |
补充:不是完全不能用主动语态!
被动语态是主流,但不是绝对禁令。主被动合理搭配,反而能让逻辑更清晰,主动语态只用在这 2 个场景:
- 描述你对方法的评估、数据分析的逻辑判断;
- 说明你对已有方法的修改、优化思路。
✅ 规范主动语态示例:
We assessed the linearity of the method using standard gradient solutions, and modified the elution procedure to improve the recovery rate of the target compound.
二、时态黄金规则:90% 内容用过去时,剩下的用现在时,绝对不混写
时态混乱是 Methods 写作的第二大重灾区,很多同学一句话里过去时、现在时混写,直接让审稿人质疑你的严谨性。
其实时态的用法极其简单,记住一个核心原则:你做过的实验操作,全用一般过去时;公认的事实 / 论文里的图表,全用一般现在时。
1. 必须用「一般过去时」的场景(90% 的内容都在这)
所有你在投稿前,已经完成的、一次性的实验操作、数据采集、样本处理,必须用一般过去时,没有例外。
✅ 正确示例:
- The reaction was incubated at 37℃ for 24 h to reach adsorption equilibrium.
- Total RNA was reverse-transcribed into cDNA using a reverse transcription kit.
- Data were collected from 3 independent biological replicates.
❌ 错误示例(最常见踩坑):
- The samples are centrifuged at 8000 rpm for 10 min.(应该用 were)
- We measure the absorbance at 450 nm with a microplate reader.(应该用 measured)
2. 必须用「一般现在时」的 3 个场景
只有这 3 种情况,才能用一般现在时,绝对不能乱用:
(1)描述公认的事实、已发表方法的原理、试剂 / 仪器的固有特性
这是行业内已经公认、不会因为你的实验改变的内容,用一般现在时。
✅ 正确示例:
- The BCA method is widely used for protein quantification due to its high stability and anti-interference ability.
- This type of solid-phase extraction column effectively removes polar impurities without affecting the recovery of target analytes.
(2)指代你论文里的图表、表格、公式
论文里的图表是客观存在的,不会随时间改变,统一用一般现在时。
✅ 正确示例:
- Figure 2 shows the standard curve of the target compound, with a linear correlation coefficient R² of 0.999.
- Table 1 summarizes the physicochemical properties of the soil samples used in the experiment.
(3)描述实验室常规性、习惯性的质控操作(极少用)
仅用于描述实验室长期固定的、常规性的操作流程,不针对本次实验的一次性操作。
三、Methods 写作避坑清单:Do's and Don'ts
把所有规则浓缩成可直接对照的避坑清单,写完对着查,再也不被审稿人挑语法毛病:
| ✅ 必做(Do's) | ❌ 绝对禁做(Don'ts) |
|---|---|
| 实验操作步骤优先用一般过去时 + 被动语态 | 通篇用 we did/we do,写成流水账日记 |
| 公认事实、论文图表统一用一般现在时 | 同一句话里过去时和现在时随意混用 |
| 步骤严格按时间 / 逻辑顺序书写,关键参数精确到数字 | 省略实验关键参数,只写「按说明书操作」 |
| 主被动合理搭配,长句拆分成短句,逻辑清晰 | 为了炫技堆砌超长复合句,导致语法错误 |
| 参考已有方法时,标注参考文献并写清修改内容 | 直接复制他人方法的句子,造成学术不端风险 |
| 写完后逐句检查时态一致性,避免低级错误 | 写完不检查,通篇时态混乱,给审稿人留下不严谨的印象 |
四、万能套用句式:分场景直接用,告别写作卡顿
给大家整理了 Methods 高频场景的万能句式,覆盖 90% 的实验写作需求,直接替换关键词就能用:
1. 样品采集与预处理
- XX samples were collected from [采样地点] between [起始时间] and [结束时间].
- The samples were pre-treated with [试剂 / 方法] to remove impurities, then stored at [温度] until further analysis.
2. 实验仪器与试剂说明
- XX reagent/antibody was purchased from [厂家,货号,产地].
- XX detection/analysis was performed using a [仪器型号,生产厂家,产地].
3. 核心实验操作步骤
- The reaction was carried out at [温度] for [时长] to ensure complete [反应目的].
- The samples were centrifuged at [转速] rpm for [时长] at [温度], and the supernatant was collected for subsequent experiments.
- The target compound was separated and purified using [色谱柱 / 方法], with a flow rate of [流速] mL/min.
4. 数据分析与统计方法
- All experiments were performed with 3 biological replicates, and data were expressed as mean ± standard deviation (SD).
- Statistical analysis was conducted using [软件名称,版本] software, with P < 0.05 considered as statistically significant.
5. 方法参考与修改说明
- The XX assay was performed according to the method described by Zhang et al. [参考文献编号], with minor modifications as follows: [具体修改内容].
结尾
很多同学觉得,论文的核心是创新的结果,Methods 只是凑字数的配角。但恰恰相反,Methods 是整篇论文的信任基石------ 再惊艳的结果,没有严谨、规范、可复现的方法支撑,都是空中楼阁。
而规范的语态与时态,不是为了满足审稿人的苛刻要求,而是为了让你的实验内容更客观、更清晰、更有说服力。记住两个黄金规则,就能避开 90% 的写作坑:
- 你的实验操作,全用一般过去时 + 被动语态;
- 公认事实、论文图表,全用一般现在时。
💬 互动话题你写 SCI 论文的时候,在 Methods 部分踩过哪些时态 / 语态的坑?欢迎在评论区留言分享你的经历!