(一)常用句型:
- Nowadays, more and more people begin to pay attention to this topic. Opinions vary from person to person.
如今,越来越多人开始关注这个话题,人们的观点各不相同。
- As far as I am concerned, I hold the view that ______ is of great importance to us.
在我看来,我认为......对我们来说十分重要。
- There is no doubt that this phenomenon has become a hot topic among teenagers.
毫无疑问,这个现象已经成为青少年之间的热门话题。
(一)段首句
- 关于......人们有不同的观点。一些人认为......
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
- 俗话说(常言道)......,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. It's the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.
- 现在,......,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,......;其次,......。更为糟糕的是......。
Today, , which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,. What makes things worse is that______.
- 现在,......很普遍,许多人喜欢......,因为......,另外(而且)......。
Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because . Besides,.
- 任何事物都是有两面性,......也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.
- 关于......人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)......,在他们看来,......
People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that _.To them,.
- 人类正面临着一个严重的问题......,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
- ......已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
- ......在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
- 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出......。很显然......,但是为什么呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______ while. Obviously,______,but why?
【for example】
Recently a survey was carried out among senior three students of our school on how to choose courses and universities. According to the figure, it can be seen that there are different opinions among people as to this issue. The following is the result of the survey.Interest has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. About 35% of the students believe the choice should be based on their own interests. They say interest is the mother of success. It is a miserable thing to have to spend most of your time studying what you have no interest in.
- 中间段落句
- 相反,有一些人赞成......,他们相信......,而且,他们认为......。
On the contrary,there are some people in favor of .At the same time,they say_. - 但是,我认为这不是解决......的好方法,比如......。最糟糕的是......。
But I don't think it is a very good way to solve .For example,.Worst of all,___. - ......对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。首先,......。而且......,最重要的是......
is necessary and important to our country"s development and construction. First,.What"s more, .Most important of all,_. - 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先,我们可以......。
There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______ - 面临......,我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来......。一方面......,另一方面,
Confronted with______,we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing,For another, - 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说......,另外......。所有这些方法肯定会......。
It is high time that something was done about it. For example. ____.In addition. .All these measures will certainly. - 为什么......?第一个原因是......;第二个原因是......;第三个原因是......。总的来说,......的主要原因是由于......
Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______. - 然而,正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样,......也有它的不利的一面,象......。
However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______. - 尽管如此,我相信......更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous. - 完全同意......这种观点(陈述),主要理由如下:
I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______. 【for example】On the contrary,there are more people in favor of the needs of the society instead of interest. Most students (around 45%) insist this idea, for, they argue, not everyone can find the job they like best. Besides, interest can be born and lost. ( changed and cultivated )
Interestingly, there are about 20% of the students who find it difficult to make a choice and would rather depend on their parents or teachers to make a decision for them.
- 相反,有一些人赞成......,他们相信......,而且,他们认为......。
(三)结尾句
- 至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为......
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.
- 总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注......这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来......。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.
- 但是,......和......都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如,......,而......。然而,把这两者相比较,我更倾向于(喜欢)......
But ______and have their own advantages. For example, , while. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to.
- 就我个人而言,我相信......,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为......
Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.
- 随着社会的发展,......。因此,迫切需要......。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量,这个社会将要变得越来越好。
With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and necessary to
____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
- 至于我(对我来说,就我而言),我认为......更合理。只有这样,我们才能......
For my part, I think it reasonable to_____. Only in this way can you _____.
- 对我来说,我认为有必要......。原因如下:第一,......; 第二,......;最后......但同样重要的是......
In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First _____.Second . Last but not least,.
- 在总体上很难说......是好还是坏,因为它在很大程度上取决于......的形势。然而,就我个人而言,我发现......。
It is difficult to say whether is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of_. However, from a personal point of view, I find______.
- 综上所述,我们可以清楚地得出结论......
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.
- 如果我们不采取有效的方法,就可能控制不了这种趋势,就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果,所以,我们应该做的是......
If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____. 【for example】It is difficult to say which one is good or not in general as it depends very much on the real situation. However, from a personal point of view,I find interest is the most important. I will feel it very terrible and miserable for me to have to learn something that I don't like. And I dare say I won't learn it well. But instead, I will devote all my energy to what I am interested in and try my best to learn it well.
Firstly, it can bring us many obvious benefits. It is helpful for us to improve ourselves and broaden our horizons.
首先,它能给我们带来许多显而易见的好处,有助于自我提升、开阔眼界。
Besides, it can also help us form a good habit and make our life more meaningful.
除此之外,它还能帮助我们养成良好习惯,让生活变得更有意义。
However, every coin has two sides. If we make bad use of it, it may also cause some negative influences.
但凡事都有两面性,若是不能合理对待,也会带来一些负面影响。
常用短语:
In addition 除此之外
• As we all know 众所周知
• From my point of view 在我看来
• On the one hand, on the other hand 一方面,另一方面
• As a result 因此,结果
金句分享:
论文结构:
概要写作:
综合写作:
论证写作:
学术摘要评论:
引言评论:
第一部分:概要
第一类引言:题目当中非常清晰地指出写作的内容。
如:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
题目要求围绕着the impact of the information explosion来写,并给出例证,解释what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information.
第二类引言:题目当中并没有指出写作的内容,只给引言。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on Albert Einstein's remark "I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious." You can cite one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 but no more than 200 words.
针对于第二类引言,大家的当务之急就是从这句引言中,选择一个合适的主题。注意:题干没有给出要求,只要扣住引言,原理上都不偏题。比如:I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious. 显然这句话的重心在curious上,讲述了好奇心的重要性。用天龙八部的话说:Curiosity plays an extremely important role in achieving success. 或者Curiosity exerts a huge impact on one's life and career.
第二部分:写法
1. 经典模块版:
这种模式帮助各位同学迅速上手,在考场上构思出一片上乘的佳作,再辅之以我前几天的内容,相信大家能在规定时间内完成。
第一段:重述引言,并且讲述引言的含义。
第一部分:重述引言
(1) Just as the saying goes, ______.
(2) It is often said that _______.
(3) An ancient philosopher once stated that _____.
第二部分:解释含义
(1) The saying tells us that ________.
(2) The saying indicates that _______.
(3) The saying obviously emphasizes /highlights _____.
范例(大家注意例子的变化):
The famous scientist Albert Einstein once stated that "I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious." Simple as the remark may sound, it intends to tell us that the importance of being curious. Being curious contributes greatly to our growth and eventually leads to our success.
第二段:讨论引言的正确性,或者举出实际例子来验证引言。
第一部分:总起
There are several reasons contributing to the correctness of this principle.
Two factors, from my point of view, could account for the validity of this principle.
Why, you may wonder, is curiosity so important for our success?
第二部分:分述(详见我的第一篇中六脉神剑,选择合适的词语)
To begin with, _________.
Furthermore, _________.
范例:
Two factors could account for the importance of being curious. To begin with, curiosity can be seen as the key to success. Only when one is curious about something will he dedicate himself to it. Take Thomas Edison for example, it was his curiosity that made him invent so many things for the future generations. Furthermore, curiosity provides us with the motivation to go forward and inspires us to learn new knowledge. As Apple Company founder Steve Jobs once said, "stay hungry, stay foolish."
第三部分:两种主要展开方式(解决倡导 + 总结观点)
建议可以这样来:
Given the factors I have just outlined, I personally argue that 总结一下文章。加几句议论。
范例:
Given the factors I have just outlined, I personally argue that it is of great necessity for us to keep curious about the world. It is curiosity that may push the world exploration into the next step. Only in this way can we have a better world.
再来看一篇短小的参考范文:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. You can give explain to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Choosing a right strategy can exert a huge impact on our success. An English saying goes like this: Don't put all your eggs in one basket. What it wants to reveal is that it is unwise to be totally dependent on one resource.
There are several reasons contributing to the validity of this principle. To begin with, it is rather risky to put all the hope in one place. If one can have a contingency plan, it can deal with the unexpected when it comes to important event. What's more, focusing on all the aspects at the same time contributes to a more balanced life. Suppose one would like to be admitted into a college. It is of vital importance for him to apply for several colleges. In this way, there is a better chance for him to be admitted.
Therefore, it is unadvisable to put everything on a single venture. Having a backup plan could help one lead a better life.
2. 个性特色版:
如果你要写出自己的版本,那么考场上一定要注意时间。思路可以按照我以下的框架来搭,这种方法一般同学请慎重使用。
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying "Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it." You can give an example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
写作思路:
第一段:叙述引出;
第二段:个人例证;
第三段:总结陈述。
范文(考神团队 陈曲版):
It has been widely noted that it is of utmost importance for a man to be equipped with knowledge. Knowledge allows one to understand the history of the world, the secrets of the universe and the stories of celebrities. Consequently, one can consider knowledge as priceless treasure. However, a bellyful of theories but very little experience makes us somewhat bookish. Without much practice, we can hardly make use of knowledge, and hence fail to unlock the treasure of knowledge. As the saying goes, "Practice makes perfect".
As a chemistry student, I have learned virtually all the fundamental principles in the chemical world during my university life. I had felt rather conceited until one day my mom asked me an unexpected question, which had never been taught in textbooks, "how to wipe off the yellow stain at the bottom of the tea cup". After a serious thought, I was totally silent and did not have a single clue. Smiling happily, mom showed me how the use vinegar or radish water to eliminate the stain left by tea leaves. Perhaps this method could be attributed to the "acid-base" theory, but how can I possibly not come up with such an idea?
Based on my personal experience, it is quite obvious that knowledge will be of little use if we do not put it into practice. Rather, we should link what we learn with how we do things. Swimming in the ocean of knowledge, we should consider how to make the water more drinkable.
研究方案: