英语老师的秘密武器：Trae智能体写作批改智能体 (改作文一条龙）🧣

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智能体制作：

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写作批改智能体 (改作文一条龙)

该智能体解决写作场景下的批改和辅导需求，是"备课学习的四件套"之一。

*   **输入与操作：** 拖拽学生手写作文的图片。
*   **任务流程（五步）：** 自动完成以下五个步骤：识别题目要求、识别学生手写原文、用**表格的逐句修改**、**中英文混合的写作提纲**、以及**常用的英文短语**。
*   **表格修改要求：** 以**表格的形式逐句修改**，表格内容包括：**原句、修改后的句子、修改说明**。
*   **提纲生成：** 生成中英文混合的写作提纲，先用**中文说明**每一部分应写的内容，随后给出**最相关的例句**。

我需要分析学生的手写作文图片，按照要求完成五步任务：识别题目要求、识别学生手写原文、用表格逐句修改、生成中英文混合的写作提纲和提供常用英文短语。我将创建一个文件来存储这些分析结果。

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我已完成学生作文的全面分析与批改，创建了详细的分析报告文件。

报告内容完整包含了五大步骤：

题目要求识别：明确了写作要求、字数限制和主题
原文识别：准确还原了学生的手写作文内容
逐句修改表格：提供了详细的原句、修改后句子和修改说明，涵盖语法、拼写、人称一致性等问题
中英文混合写作提纲：为开头段、主体段和结尾段提供了中文说明和相关例句
常用英文短语：分类整理了紧急情况、急救措施、火灾安全等方面的实用表达

这份分析报告将帮助学生理解写作中的问题并学习正确的表达方式，同时提供了丰富的写作资源供参考。

作文分析与批改报告

一、题目要求识别

根据图片内容，本次写作要求如下：

包含所有给出的信息，可适当发挥
词数80左右
开头已给出："Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents."，不计入总词数
主题是关于如何应对一些意外事故的建议

二、学生原文识别

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Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents.

If I cook dinner and hurt my hand. First, We should put our hands in the rice water ten minutes. Then, we should put a dean cloth on hurtand see a doctor.

When we meeting a fire, we should put wate on our mouth and noise and get out quickly.

三、逐句修改（表格形式）

原句	修改后的句子	修改说明
Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents.	Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents.	开头句正确，无需修改
If I cook dinner and hurt my hand.	If I burn my hand while cooking dinner.	1. 将"cook dinner and hurt my hand"改为更符合逻辑的"burn my hand while cooking dinner" 2. 明确是烫伤(burn)而非一般伤害 3. 调整句子结构使其更流畅
First, We should put our hands in the rice water ten minutes.	First, you should put your hand in cold water for ten minutes.	1. 人称不一致：将"We"改为"you"与第一人称保持一致 2. 米饭水(rice water)改为更准确的冷水(cold water) 3. 添加介词"for"表示持续时间
Then, we should put a dean cloth on hurtand see a doctor.	Then, you should put a clean cloth on the burn and see a doctor.	1. 人称不一致：将"we"改为"you" 2. 拼写错误：将"dean"改为"clean" 3. 添加定冠词"the"和名词"burn"使句子更完整 4. 修正单词连接错误"hurtand"
When we meeting a fire, we should put wate on our mouth and noise and get out quickly.	When you meet a fire, you should cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth and get out quickly.	1. 语法错误：将"meeting"改为"meet" 2. 人称不一致：将"we"改为"you" 3. 修正短语：将"put wate on"改为"cover...with a wet cloth" 4. 修正拼写错误：将"wate"改为"water"，但更准确的表达是用湿布 5. 修正拼写错误：将"noise"改为"nose" 6. 添加更具体的描述"with a wet cloth"

四、中英文混合写作提纲

开头段 (Introduction)

中文说明：开头问候并点明文章主题，说明本文将提供处理意外事故的建议
相关例句："Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents. Knowing what to do in emergencies can help us stay safe."

主体段一 (Body Paragraph 1)：处理烫伤

中文说明：描述烹饪时烫伤手的情况，并提供急救步骤
相关例句："If you burn your hand while cooking dinner, don't panic. First, put it under cold running water for about 10 minutes. Then, cover the burn with a clean cloth. If the burn is serious, remember to see a doctor as soon as possible."

主体段二 (Body Paragraph 2)：应对火灾

中文说明：说明遇到火灾时的安全措施，包括如何防止吸入烟雾和逃生
相关例句："When there is a fire, it's important to stay calm. First, cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth to avoid breathing in smoke. Then, get out of the building quickly through the nearest exit. Remember not to use the elevator!"

结尾段 (Conclusion)

中文说明：总结全文，强调了解急救知识的重要性
相关例句："In short, these tips can help you deal with common accidents. Always remember that safety comes first. I hope everyone stays safe!"

五、常用英文短语

紧急情况表达

In case of emergency... (紧急情况下...)
Don't panic! (别惊慌!)
Stay calm. (保持冷静)
Call for help immediately. (立即寻求帮助)
It's an emergency! (这是紧急情况!)

急救措施表达

Put...under cold water. (将...放在冷水下)
Cover...with a clean cloth. (用干净的布覆盖...)
See a doctor as soon as possible. (尽快看医生)
Call 120 for an ambulance. (拨打120叫救护车)
Avoid touching the wound. (避免触碰伤口)

火灾安全表达

Get down on your knees. (趴低身子)
Cover your mouth and nose. (捂住口鼻)
Use the stairs, not the elevator. (使用楼梯，不要使用电梯)
Find the nearest exit. (寻找最近的出口)
Stay away from smoke. (远离烟雾)

建议性表达

It's important to... (重要的是...)
Remember to... (记得...)
You should/shouldn't... (你应该/不应该...)
Make sure to... (确保...)
It's better to... (最好...)

总结性表达

In short,... (总之...)
To sum up,... (总而言之...)
These tips can help you... (这些建议可以帮助你...)
Always keep in mind that... (始终记住...)
I hope everyone... (我希望每个人...)