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智能体制作：
我用 TRAE 做了一个有意思的Agent 「写作批改智能体 (改作文一条龙)」。 点击 s.trae.com.cn/a/241a46 立即复刻，一起来玩吧！
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写作批改智能体 (改作文一条龙)
该智能体解决写作场景下的批改和辅导需求，是"备课学习的四件套"之一。
* **输入与操作：** 拖拽学生手写作文的图片。
* **任务流程（五步）：** 自动完成以下五个步骤：识别题目要求、识别学生手写原文、用**表格的逐句修改**、**中英文混合的写作提纲**、以及**常用的英文短语**。
* **表格修改要求：** 以**表格的形式逐句修改**，表格内容包括：**原句、修改后的句子、修改说明**。
* **提纲生成：** 生成中英文混合的写作提纲，先用**中文说明**每一部分应写的内容，随后给出**最相关的例句**。
我需要分析学生的手写作文图片，按照要求完成五步任务：识别题目要求、识别学生手写原文、用表格逐句修改、生成中英文混合的写作提纲和提供常用英文短语。我将创建一个文件来存储这些分析结果。
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我已完成学生作文的全面分析与批改，创建了详细的分析报告文件 。
报告内容完整包含了五大步骤：
- 题目要求识别：明确了写作要求、字数限制和主题
- 原文识别：准确还原了学生的手写作文内容
- 逐句修改表格：提供了详细的原句、修改后句子和修改说明，涵盖语法、拼写、人称一致性等问题
- 中英文混合写作提纲：为开头段、主体段和结尾段提供了中文说明和相关例句
- 常用英文短语：分类整理了紧急情况、急救措施、火灾安全等方面的实用表达
这份分析报告将帮助学生理解写作中的问题并学习正确的表达方式，同时提供了丰富的写作资源供参考。
作文分析与批改报告
一、题目要求识别
根据图片内容，本次写作要求如下：
- 包含所有给出的信息，可适当发挥
- 词数80左右
- 开头已给出："Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents."，不计入总词数
- 主题是关于如何应对一些意外事故的建议
二、学生原文识别
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Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents.
If I cook dinner and hurt my hand. First, We should put our hands in the rice water ten minutes. Then, we should put a dean cloth on hurtand see a doctor.
When we meeting a fire, we should put wate on our mouth and noise and get out quickly.三、逐句修改（表格形式）
| 原句 | 修改后的句子 | 修改说明 |
|---|---|---|
| Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents. | Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents. | 开头句正确，无需修改 |
| If I cook dinner and hurt my hand. | If I burn my hand while cooking dinner. | 1. 将"cook dinner and hurt my hand"改为更符合逻辑的"burn my hand while cooking dinner" 2. 明确是烫伤(burn)而非一般伤害 3. 调整句子结构使其更流畅 |
| First, We should put our hands in the rice water ten minutes. | First, you should put your hand in cold water for ten minutes. | 1. 人称不一致：将"We"改为"you"与第一人称保持一致 2. 米饭水(rice water)改为更准确的冷水(cold water) 3. 添加介词"for"表示持续时间 |
| Then, we should put a dean cloth on hurtand see a doctor. | Then, you should put a clean cloth on the burn and see a doctor. | 1. 人称不一致：将"we"改为"you" 2. 拼写错误：将"dean"改为"clean" 3. 添加定冠词"the"和名词"burn"使句子更完整 4. 修正单词连接错误"hurtand" |
| When we meeting a fire, we should put wate on our mouth and noise and get out quickly. | When you meet a fire, you should cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth and get out quickly. | 1. 语法错误：将"meeting"改为"meet" 2. 人称不一致：将"we"改为"you" 3. 修正短语：将"put wate on"改为"cover...with a wet cloth" 4. 修正拼写错误：将"wate"改为"water"，但更准确的表达是用湿布 5. 修正拼写错误：将"noise"改为"nose" 6. 添加更具体的描述"with a wet cloth" |
四、中英文混合写作提纲
开头段 (Introduction)
- 中文说明：开头问候并点明文章主题，说明本文将提供处理意外事故的建议
- 相关例句："Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents. Knowing what to do in emergencies can help us stay safe."
主体段一 (Body Paragraph 1)：处理烫伤
- 中文说明：描述烹饪时烫伤手的情况，并提供急救步骤
- 相关例句："If you burn your hand while cooking dinner, don't panic. First, put it under cold running water for about 10 minutes. Then, cover the burn with a clean cloth. If the burn is serious, remember to see a doctor as soon as possible."
主体段二 (Body Paragraph 2)：应对火灾
- 中文说明：说明遇到火灾时的安全措施，包括如何防止吸入烟雾和逃生
- 相关例句："When there is a fire, it's important to stay calm. First, cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth to avoid breathing in smoke. Then, get out of the building quickly through the nearest exit. Remember not to use the elevator!"
结尾段 (Conclusion)
- 中文说明：总结全文，强调了解急救知识的重要性
- 相关例句："In short, these tips can help you deal with common accidents. Always remember that safety comes first. I hope everyone stays safe!"
五、常用英文短语
紧急情况表达
- In case of emergency... (紧急情况下...)
- Don't panic! (别惊慌!)
- Stay calm. (保持冷静)
- Call for help immediately. (立即寻求帮助)
- It's an emergency! (这是紧急情况!)
急救措施表达
- Put...under cold water. (将...放在冷水下)
- Cover...with a clean cloth. (用干净的布覆盖...)
- See a doctor as soon as possible. (尽快看医生)
- Call 120 for an ambulance. (拨打120叫救护车)
- Avoid touching the wound. (避免触碰伤口)
火灾安全表达
- Get down on your knees. (趴低身子)
- Cover your mouth and nose. (捂住口鼻)
- Use the stairs, not the elevator. (使用楼梯，不要使用电梯)
- Find the nearest exit. (寻找最近的出口)
- Stay away from smoke. (远离烟雾)
建议性表达
- It's important to... (重要的是...)
- Remember to... (记得...)
- You should/shouldn't... (你应该/不应该...)
- Make sure to... (确保...)
- It's better to... (最好...)
总结性表达
- In short,... (总之...)
- To sum up,... (总而言之...)
- These tips can help you... (这些建议可以帮助你...)
- Always keep in mind that... (始终记住...)
- I hope everyone... (我希望每个人...)